How has the story envolved:
Will starts dating Suzie, and goes on a picnic with her, her daughter, and Marcus. Marcus is bored so he starts to throw bread on ducks. He kills one, but Will helps him getting out of trouble when the park-keeper shows up. at the end the day, when they go to drop off Marcus at his mums flat, they found her laying on the floor halfdead with an empty pill bottle next to her. They take her to the hospital and she survives. when she gets home again she seems to be happy and normal, just as if nothing happend. But Marcus knows that she wont stay like that for long, so he starts to hang out in Wills flat and realizes that he have no kid. But he doesn't tell his mum because he wants her and Will to be together so that he wont be alone if she died.
Maincaracters developing:
Will:
He's getting bored of the kid thing and stops going to the SPAT meetings. He's confused about Marcus and his mum. Sometimes he wants to leave and never see them again and sometimes he just wants to take care of them.
He doesn't do a thing for living. He gets money from his fathers christmas song(Santa's Super Sleight) but he is searching for jobs just for fun
Marcus:
He's stil getting bullied at school, and he doesn't feel good at home. So he sanctuary at Wills flat.
A good description of the way they change - think about what they start to mean to each other!
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