About a Boy (4/5)

The grammar is not to difficult but the sentenses can be long and complex sometimes, it's a mix though.

The story is a good blend of dialogues, thoughts and descriptions of the characters and events in the story.

The vocabluary changes a lot with the characters, Marcus speaks very oldfashion and mature even though he's only twelve. Will speaks very childish and swears a lot, he also uses alot of dialect.

The narrator is like god. He knows everything about everyone and the vocabluary he's using defines who the characters are


"You pathetic little shitbags." We think this is sentense explains what kind of person Ellie (Marcus Friend(sort of(in a way you dont know:):):) is.
"I dunno." Will said this and  it really shows what kind dialect he's usingh.